All Comments on 'I'm the Luckiest Man Alive'

Lost me partway through Page 1.

Few small spelling mistakes (missing 1 letter, or 1 too many), & a few sentences long enough to be their own paragraph or (in 1 assured case) having 1 extra word (that leaps out).

Loved it. But I wondered, was she the one Derick was fucking?

SO WHAT IS THE POINT OF COMMENTS ABOUT THE SPELLING AND THE STANXT, The stories are the creation of the author who writes to entertain the reader and not for the purpose of criticism as to spelling etc. I enjoyed the story and gave it four stars for its entertainment value. Please keep writing MKDons.