All Comments on 'Immigrant Ch. 03'

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Read all chapters... Dont see any issues with spelling or consistency... Love the detailing, could use more in some places (such as physical detailing). Only major issue... Period blood, and urine... No one really likes that. People who say they do, are usually lying.

But all and all, another well done story!

I know it's a story, but the marriage wouldn't last. Shani is too demanding, and basically wants a slave. She says she loves him, but everything is about her...