All Comments on 'In Her Service'

Really great story, but I disliked your ending. That is just my personal taste and nothing more. Also as a citric might I recommend you give more detail of what she gives her Knight. (Mainly referring to the panties given to the Knight.)

Enjoyed the gradual sensualness and the thoroughness of the eventual total submission. I would have preferred a longer, more protracted expression of that capitulation in the ending.

I love the slow hypnotic seduction the total submission of mind and soul to a women is my fantasy since Dark Shadows and Angelique and those eyes. Great story thank you

... ruined what could have been great.

2/5