by MyQueensBitchBoy
I love the slow hypnotic seduction the total submission of mind and soul to a women is my fantasy since Dark Shadows and Angelique and those eyes. Great story thank you
Enjoyed the gradual sensualness and the thoroughness of the eventual total submission. I would have preferred a longer, more protracted expression of that capitulation in the ending.
Really great story, but I disliked your ending. That is just my personal taste and nothing more. Also as a citric might I recommend you give more detail of what she gives her Knight. (Mainly referring to the panties given to the Knight.)