All Comments on 'In Time Ch. 06'

I love the story line but this one didn't sit right with me. He basically had those guys rape her and expects her to be compliant to him? It would be awesome if this is what broke her and he realizes what an ass he is

When I saw this next part, a smile immediately played on my mouth.

I must admit that I prefer to see Mae 1 on 1 with Jack, but this was her punishment, at least for her partly😁

Insanely written again. Eagerly looking forward to the next part

Gr Kitchy

This is easily the hottest story on the site; please keep writing!

Really enjoying the story so far, it's very well written and I like Mae a lot. But I really didn't enjoy the scene with the three men. I can understand how Mae could come to enjoy her time with Jack, as she seemed to have some sort of crush on him at the start of the story, and he seems to care about her deep down. But the scene with the three men felt really wrong and kind of upsetting. Reading that scene was like a punishment for me. I'll continue to read and enjoy the story, but I hope there isn't much more of this.