All Comments on 'In Trouble Pt. 01'

Huh. Well there’s absolutely no doubt that this is pure fantasy! It lacks realism, where’s the logical mind numbing terror from being abducted then being presented to three men to be used as a sex toy? They let her see them, so what part of her believes that she’s going to get out of this alive? I understand cooperating with captors done with a view to survive but there was no evidence of that here, just a half hearted token resistance. If nothing else then surely the photo is proof that none of what happened is actually about her, is she spineless or just brainless? I quit part way through then had to go back and actually check to see if she did have any objections.

Best of luck with your writing. Tess (uk)

I like your stories! Keep writing. Check mine out too if you'd like. :)