All Comments on 'Indecent Descent Ch. 02'

Well, you've now turned what could have been a sexy Dom/sub story into something that's sick and scary. It's also somewhat unbelievable that James would be so submissive this soon even though he's frightened. By the way, eating dog food is dangerous for humans and drinking piss will cause dehydration. So, if Greg is planning on making James seriously ill, he's starting off well. I'm sure you'll have some fans who'll be turned on reading about enslaved torture but I'm here for erotica. You have talent, I wish you wrote something I enjoyed reading. MLF

Very good and very nice beginning. I love where this FICTION is heading, mostly exciting!!!

Please keep it on!

James will definitely be dead.

So, what happened, two chapters and then nothing? Please tell me you're not another one of those writers that start a story and then drops it without an ending. But I guess it doesn't matter now anyway. After three weeks of living outside in an open cage, with nothing but dogfood to eat and piss to drink, I'm sure James is already dead!!!