All Comments on 'Indian Milf has a Wild First Time'

It seems something went wrong with your copy paste in the last two paragraphs. That apart, please do a course in English before coming back here.

K Sharon - thank you for this! So hot! You paint the picture of the mature, conservative but also sensual woman very well. Reading this turned me on a lot and I can't wait for the next chapter!

Anonymous - thanks for pointing out the error. Is there s specific school of English that you are running where I could take a course to ensure that I have your blessing to "come back here"?

Nice comeback hsharon, I’m wondering what “cut paste” actually means?

Surely the anonymous grammar nazi didn’t omit the ‘and’ out of his rant?

I’ll watch out for part 2, thanks from Australia

I wrote the story on notepad and copy pasted it paragraph by paragraph because the screen size was small on my laptop. I should have proof read. This is the first time I'm trying this

YOU NEED TO BRING OUT P2 ASAP, IVE BEEN WAITING FOR SO LONG NOW