by PPanwar
I don’t know about the Indian Mom but the author does seem to be in some crisis with his/her writing.
Yes, loved how this escalated! I thought the first two parts meandered a bit, but this one really brought out the protagonist's character. The cum scenes were... 👌🏽
Good work. Really hope there's a follow up coming to this. I like how Sumana's story arc is growing ever more self-centred and caters to her own pleasure!
Just loved the erotic scenes! Sumana's descent into debauchery - oof! Well done. Really hope we get a next part that brings the daughters into play.
How is this story rated sub-3?! It was wild ride - really want to see more diverse stories like this.
bring on the next part. could see a few potholes that are symptomatic of a first-time writer, but overall great attempt!
Excellent! I didn't see the intensity of the sex reaching that level so soon. May be could have reduced it a bit, and dragged for the next chapter, but nice none so less...
There's nothing quite like a formerly conservative mom being reduced to the level of common slut... Hm,