by loveking
This was basically a one chapter story. That was quite erotic. But dragging on to the next chapter made it rather monotonous. Too much of the same thing makes it boring. Besides Indrani wished for a little liscentiousness (harmless in the sense that her deviousness was harming no one), but by spreading out the video you practically destroyed her life. She has nowhere to hide. Any day her husband will come to see the video and her life will be over. Extremely cruel. We should enjoy a liscentious story without being cruel. The story should have ended with Indrani and her husband leaving for the US.
That was awesome Loved reading and enjoyed every aspect of your story. Thank you for sharing
Absolutely fantastic, really enjoyed it, hope that you have arranged for more adventures for Indrani?
As always I really enjoyed your story.
I would probably have used a previous character like Yuko in place of Chi, but that is just personal preference. Overall the story was good.