All Comments on 'Innocence is Bliss Ch. 01'

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AnonymousOmegaAnonymousOmegaover 2 years ago

So glad to see something new from you! Well done as always, hot as hell the way you described everything. Looking forward to reading more!

Saratoga11Saratoga11over 2 years ago

Another amazing story!

MissPAdventurousMissPAdventurousover 2 years ago

Love it! Got me soaked as always.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Well, there are couple of options for the future. The quick ending would be for Alison's father to take his brother out to the woods and come back without him. The next would be to confront his brother and get in on the action with his daughter in a father/daughter video. Later could be for his wife and daughter to film together, then with all three, then with her uncle. We could eventually find out that Alison has already enjoyed gangbangs, nude modelling, sex clubs, adult sex shops, gloryholes, and even some escort services. Hopefully we will get to read more of the adventures of Alison.

HumbleIncubusHumbleIncubusover 2 years ago

Would love to see Alison grow to embrace the career, and her father learning to support her decision.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Was hoping a 2nd chapter to Uncle Visit but this story look promising. It vibes alot with Sin and Desires. Can’t wait to see how Alys grow in her “respectable” career choices

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Can't say i also wasn't looking foward to more of Uncle Visit but i'd rather it come when the writer has inspiration to do so rather than rushing the next part just to get it out. Now if i could request anything i would love it if the author did more stories that involved more hate sex but we can't always get what we want, makes the domination and submission aspect feel so much more powerful in my opinion. Back on topic great story as always

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I'm posting a combination of stories I wrote for myself, and commissions I took for others. If you have a story idea, feel free to contact me to see if we can work something out. Thanks for all the questions and feedback! It's appreciated.

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