by work_aholic
It's just a poor concept. Combined with mediocre writing, you're dead in the water before you got out of the gate.
Rushed story with no vivid details or emotional aspects. Three stars generously.
Very well written story. The low score comes from the fact that the LDM don’t like the subject matter. The 3 pump and dump crowd is afraid that their wives will do the same to them.
Pretty good for story . Just wish in real world men and women both get out of marriage if unhappy before you cheat