All Comments on 'Intertwined Fates'

I knew it was a first time story before opening. They know how to do nothing more than worn out IR or cuck stories. You'll go nowhere fast with crap like this.

"You'll go no where fast with crap like this." Okay, Anon. Come out from behind your Anonymity and give me actual concrit,

10/10, please tell me you are going to add more to the story!!!!

@Bratty. They won't because like the rest of the anons they can only post non constructive and angry comments. They never post anything themselves and can only jack off in the hope they find some kind of satisfaction.

Ignore the plebs called anon.