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Click hereShe simply said, 'because I'm being watched'.
I knew now what she meant, and I had the feeling I was being watched and evaluated as well. It kept me focused. Thanks dad.
We arrived home and Jade dug her fingers out of the dash padding. "God Jack, I've paid money for less scary rides than that." I grinned over at her and she shook her gorgeous head and extracted herself from the vehicle. "Next time I'm walking. Twenty miles in heels has gotta be less stress!"
A car horn frightened the shit out of me! I clambered out and raised the Ray Bans. The black Lamborghini Gallardo sat demonically behind me; a present from my mom to Jessica on her 21st birthday. The door raised and two impossibly long legs swiveled out, and equally impossible heels contacted the flagstones. Jess was likely the second most gorgeous female on the planet, eclipsed marginally (in my mind) only by her little sister. Jess's breasts were half watermelons encased in a shiny red plastic looking vest and trying desperately to escape to freedom. Those legs and her bum appeared painted in black and the material shimmered almost translucently. Her reflective sunglasses hid those blue eyes that I knew were smiling at me.
"Hey there big boy, happy birthday!" She flicked her golden hair back and pecked my cheek in greeting. Jess offered her elbow as did my Jade and together we bounced bums up the entrance stairs and into the foyer. I was buzzing!
My cake was ridiculous and a fire station wouldn't have doused that bonfire! What hope did my poor heaving lungs have! Mom handed me an envelope and said happy birthday. It was a simple deed, signed by my father. It was worth about twenty billion dollars.
"I have an announcement to make. Um..." I turned to face Jade. She smiled and winked. Fuck! I went weak at the knees and reached into my pocket. "Um, Jade, um, you know how much I love you beautiful." It was a stutter. She grinned. I dropped to my knee before her and sucked in a gut full of courage. "Would you consent to be my wife?" I was going glassy eyed and I tried to blink away the saltiness. I opened the little box and the rock glinted up at her. The bloody carrots paled in her presence.
"Oh Jack, it's really beautiful. She smiled warmly."Thank you beautiful boy."
I felt faint. Everyone cheered.
I think I heard angels singing...
Thanks dad.
THE END.
*****
I hope you all enjoyed. Cheers, ARCH. (Next to Arch Stanton and still unknown.) Ref; The good, the bad and the ugly.
- COMMENTS
PhoenixLore19812 months agoNo likable characters you made it sound like a couple of them were slaves like you are living in the days slavery was a thing you Made the dying man a cuck bitch as well as well as making it sound like the son was you also made it sound like the son was gay by saying the three of them bounced their bums up the path only women and gay guys do that shit honestly this was just pathetic and shouldn't even be allowed on this site
LadyLore2 months agoNothing about this was happy ending for anyone the 2 women characters wasn't likable the husband who died from cancer died a cuck little wimp so you took his man hood away and what's up with the pet and owner bullshit that made it even worse I mean seriously are you thinking you live in the days when slavery was around cause you made it sound like 1 of the women was a slave to everyone and you made it sound like jack Jr was a slave and a cuck bitch like you made his father before he died
Bham4879 months agoIsn’t Angel the boss? She the one who owns everything well until her kid turns 21?
Anonymousover 1 year agoThis just.. wasn't good? Nothing about this is happy or even remotely close to good.
This whole story boils down to "lying Gold diggers win because smart guys are naive cucks"
She's borderline evil and gets a pat on the back and a good job. Was actually a miserable read.
Anonymousover 1 year agoThis is, without a doubt, one of the most stupid stories about the most pathetic pieces of shit characters I've come across on this site. It's absolute trash.
RubiconXover 1 year agoThis is a too-long, meandering, over-written mess with characters who don’t act like real people and situations too bogus to read credibly.
Anonymousalmost 2 years agoNo just a really flash cuck story.trying to be a novel. Husband supposed to accept wife's affair and prove how caring and understanding he is rubbish she got the cake and the steak meal. Just another tired cuck story
Anonymousabout 2 years agoA lot of beautiful, prosaic writing weighed down by their inclusion in long, hard-to-read sentences, ambiguous allusions and too much passive voice. There were too many diversions from whatever the plot really was... 3/5.
Rancher46over 2 years agoAfter 10 pages of this disgusting story, I wonder why I ever read past the point where jack woke up to find that his wife and Carl had two children. The bottom-line was that Jill was always cheating with Carl from the very beginning and when Jack awoke and found out what had happened, he should have divorced her and threw her out. After that the storyline just went downhill and just became sick. I give it a 1 for content.
Anonymousover 2 years agoStarted out decent, became pretty bad. I'd hoped he'd leave Jill for Kathy.
nixroxabout 3 years ago2 for this story.
It was just way to much FANTASY and really hard to get past the first page.
That is why I just skipped to the end and avoided all that stuff in the middle.
SwordWielderalmost 5 years agoI liked the story, but disagree with how he handled the cheating. Once he woke up from the coma and found out about the affair, I would have done the following:
1) collected DNA samples from carl, Jill, and their 2 kids
2) then I would have arranged to contact organized crime and put a multi-million dollar contract out on carl that would go into effect if certain conditions were met regardless if I was alive or dead at the time
3) then I would have arranged for both blood work and polygraph test (lie detector) to be done to both carl and jill on a certain day
4) I would then confront them (in the presence of th security) and advise them that I was insisting on them taking blood work (to make sure they weren't on drugs) and the lie detector test to find out 1) if he set out to steal my wife, 2) when their relationship had started, and 3) if they had intentionally damaged my marriage. I would tell carl his choice was 1) take the test and if he failed accept that a contract on his life would become active (he penis would be cut off, shoved down his throat while a large blunt object was forced up his rear - yes, this would be to the death) or he could run and not only would the contract be on his life, but also on his kids. As for jill, if she cheated there would be a divorce and she would leave with nothing but her girls and a highly tarnished reputation as a cheating wife.
Anonymousabout 6 years agoQuite sure Jack was a cartoon stooge cucky-boy. Guess you know exactly how he feels.
What a fucking waste of electrons.
