All Comments on 'Intruder'

by damedangereuse

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AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Wait....

You can't stop there! Please finish it. We want more! We want more! :) Seriously, a very good story. As they say, always leave the reader wanting more...and you definitely did. Great job.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
I think...

..you've a gift...More please, much more!

C'est moi...

x

Too_Young_NowToo_Young_Nowabout 13 years ago
continue

continue I want to read more

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
always with the yielding

She wasn't very reluctant at the end.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
HOTT

I love a good forced story where she begins to like it....great job!!!

ReluctantLittleLionReluctantLittleLionabout 5 years ago
Boring and not fitting in "reluctant."

If she immediately wants him, she's hardly reluctant. What's for totally taking me out of the moment. 1/5

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