by damedangereuse
You can't stop there! Please finish it. We want more! We want more! :) Seriously, a very good story. As they say, always leave the reader wanting more...and you definitely did. Great job.
I love a good forced story where she begins to like it....great job!!!
If she immediately wants him, she's hardly reluctant. What's for totally taking me out of the moment. 1/5