All Comments on 'Intruder on Board'

This is the epitome of good story writing. You had a good plot, written well and the conclusion was fantastic.

I sent this to my daughter and her daughter. Great story! Keep it up.

Lt. Collins needed a lesson in the ways of how wome work - in a nutshell - HELL HATH NO FURY LIKE A WOMAN SCORNED!!! Although, I'm surprised she didn't jump his bones afterwards... Very good and funny story! Keep up the good work.

Erotic and amusing tale made me smile when reading it. I concur; do keep writing. Thanks.

awesome story, hilarious ending. please keep writing

It sorta reminds me of the Tower of Temptation scene in Monty Python's Holy Grail. Janice could certainly stand a little more of THAT peril!