All Comments on 'Invisible Pt. 05 - The Book'

Imaginative and very well written. I enjoyed your story immensely. *****

I did not foresee that ending. Well done. Thanks.

It's getting more interesting.... looking forward for next one.

Great story and well written. Beside that, i wonder if Thommy would learn something out of that experience - there are many nice woman he could be happy with - and obviously them with him. His first encounter should gave hints if he cared about an woman and how to push her buttons he would find himself in an real relationship. The last woman watching porn did show there could be other unsatisfied women to be happy with, too. Revenge against some users is ok but i would like to see him go on from an user to find a lover. Thank you for publishing an nice story

Wonderful adventure! You have created a new and refreshing point of view that I find fascinating. I expect and anticipate further adventures with Olivia, Jennifer, and Tommy.

There are so few authors who can create and manage interesting characters, creative dialogue, and a story that continues to grow. I applaud your efforts, and anxiously look forward to more!

Brilliant