by lovingfeeling23
Awesome and interesting plot. I really enjoyed your wording, your pace and your characters. More than 5 stars. Please continue with more incest stories.Especially mother and son …
The three of them are so in love with each other yet they keep bringing others in and ruining the whole thing. Get rid of all of these extra characters and it would have been a great story/series but you continually ruin everthing by add more people. 1/5
It started as a great story between a brother and a sister. Then you added mom which was ok and still a great story then the tennis coach which was still a good story but didn’t really like the expansion. The some random couple in Aruba and now just some random dude. At this point you might as well just make them into whores. You already ruined what was a great story to begin with. Sad…just to try to extend the series 1/5
Loved this series but didn't care for brining John into the mix you should write more of this 5 stars
It feels like I've been reading a harem hentai manga for 99 chapters and loving it, but suddenly the author decides to introduce NTR elements in the next chapter.
Love the plots and dialogue but really enjoy the way brother and sister really go at it after each other. Bringing mom into it was kinda weird but tenderly and very sensuous. I could have done without John, but I guess you can only write about brother, sister and mom so many times before its all just the same. Introducing new characters is good, just wasn't crazy about John. Keep writing. You express your sexuality and sensuous feelings so well. You write so beautifully well.
I wish people were as open minded, self assured and self aware as the characters in this story.
Already established, John is the protagonist of this site. I don't know how many stories I've read about John suddenly appearing out of nowhere and effortlessly obtaining everything. I wonder if you authors have a secret agreement to name characters like that John.