All Comments on 'Island Discipline Ch. 22'

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jkimjkimalmost 12 years ago
the end...

...feels near, and so far, so good for a quality ending. So few stories of this type end realistically, so cheers for you to succeed where so many others fail, cyberdiva!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
The End

Thank You for completing this story. So many stories start out promising and are never completed. Here's hoping Kristy finds what she's looking for.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago

I hope their is much more of this story. Does she return to work and still serve both of you?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Yuck

You had a good story going, but this chapter was just gross. You seemed to build the story with focus on relationships. Then suddenly you let a whole party loose on Kristy. This section made me nauseaus. Why let David stand out like a wimp?

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