All Comments on 'It All Started With A Bet.... Ch. 03'

that really turned me on

It was great and I loved the last parts of awareness. Not many people realize that or they just dont care thinking pregnancy is the worst. Your stories are great and such a turn on. Keep writing.

1. "Claire" is being used as both you and a character

- You type both "she said" and "I said" in the story, which one is it?

2. Know the difference between:

WERE = past tense = "We were going out"

WE'RE = conjunction = we are

YOUR = belongs to = your cat

YOU'RE = conjunction = you are

This was really sexy. I liked how John was caring for her. Nice of you to add that warning in the end :)