by Tymak8
I want to read about Ezreal fucking jaxson’s ass and Jax sucking Ez and swallowing his cum. A sexy former straight dude going all out for his gay lover is so hot!!
I think your story suggests that Jaxson has a hairy chest. Please write more and capitalize on this detail. Jaxson is one sexy guy! Love that they are in love!
The story is totally fine unless some 'slut' swears. I thought there was a joke about true love kiss with magical healing power But nevertheless.
This definitely doesn’t suck. First story of yours that I’ve read and it’s Five Stars and a Follow from me. Third person is hard and for a first attempt you did fine. Awkward in places but that seemed to be verb tense choices messing with the flow. I’m sure you will improve with practice because you are clearly talented. Now I have to pick another one of your stories to see the difference!
Good story!
And I disagree with @anonymoys - no, definitely do not capitalize on chest hair details! :D
Smooth is beautiful :D Sexy, hard muscles...