All Comments on 'It's a Date'

Very hot.

Love it

Very hot story. Thanks for sharing this. 5-stars.

5 Stars. Great story, well-paced and plenty of detail, I kind of felt like I was in Steven's office watching them while they were doing it.

PLEASE keep writing, you're very talented.

Good premise.

But sex is much too automatic. Too mechanical. Lacks any sort of tension.

Four stars.

“Closing the door, she leaned against it and smiled. She leaned against the door and smiled at him.”

I think we got it the first time.

BTW, nouns, when used as names, are capitalized.

“He was a mere babe.” Not a name.

“I love you, Babe.” Is a name.

Thanks for catching the duplicate sentence. I corrected it. I also fixed the capitalization issue. Updated version has been submitted. I don't know when it will go live.

In real life, both would be fired. I know from experience 30 years ago.

This story is beautifully written, but it would have been better with a longer introduction and build-up. The love scene is well done, but it is also rather too short, especially given the quality of the writing. A sequel is definitely needed.

Fantastic story with everything just right.

Don't listen to the critics