All Comments on 'It's Been A While'

Hot little number - not bad for a first story, shows promise, need tp play with your words a little is all.

Very hot piece of work.

And such a fine use of language!

Well done.

Good offering. I would suggest using an editor/proofreader. Since I started using an editor my submissions have improved. I only saw 2 typos. Keep writing.

...the way I like it. This can't be your first story, it's way too good. If it is, give up the day job.

Very good story. The pacing worked incredibly well - the hot, fast fucking of illicit lovers. I love the way you write, keep it up!

Good entertaining story. But... (There always is a ‘but’) the opening sentence must be some "coded message" that my magic decoder ring could not decipher.

"That guy from Staind was right. It's been a while, but I can still remember just the way she tastes."

What guy? Where’s Staind? Was the "she" in the sentence a mistake? Was it supposed to read "he"...?

Other wise, it was a good sex story. Good use of words and phrases. Not much "depth" to the story and not much character development. Just a good sex story.

Lovely pacing and great style for a first time.

Could've been hotter if you'd given us more detail of the reasons for their infatuation. Even so, a good story.

High school kid, or college professor?

Was he Fucking a female chimpanzee? Didn't make a lot of sense.