All Comments on 'It's Brutal Out Here'

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AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

amazing fic! hope we see more of Olivia bottoming

Heyoo47Heyoo473 months ago

Know I’ve already talked with you a lot about this fic but was reading it again and this is the first time the mention of Olivia being ‘annoyingly good at everything’ really stood out to me. Granted, I know the line is from her friend Sofia’s perspective but I feel like you had to know how much a line like that would mean to me, lol :-) Also agreed with Sofia that the thought of Olivia fingering her own cute little butt is insanely hot. That could be a chapter itself lol.

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I am not a professional writer and welcome constructive criticism. Any stories I write that are loosely based on a celebrity or TV character comes from a place of fan worship and boredom. My stories feature themes of predominantly one woman dominating another. Strap-on anal se...