All Comments on 'It's Complicated Ch. 11'

Im sooo glad that you finally updated :) the chapters just keep getting better and better. Now you gotta hurry up with the next installment lol Im seriously hooked!

It feels too much like you glossed over the fact that someone she trusted has been lying to her for 3 years.

She is so damn spoiled and immature! I can almost forgive these guys for not being honest with her. She seems incapable of rational thought. Waylon being pushed over the edge was quite the shocker. If you were going for high drama, mission accomplished! I wouldn't mind if the next chapter was a little more thorough, thoughts and feelings of the characters and all.

I keep reading because I want an ending. She reminds me of me at 16 except I didn't have sex. I can understand why she doesn't want to hear any explanations but if she wants to be over it then why doesn't she just listen and get it over with

definitely agree with some of the other posts. She acts like she never grew up...irritating. She gets mad 'cause her fuck buddy actually had feelings for her while she acts like Cohen in a sense, love 'em and leave 'em and you best understand because that's how it is. Kinda ironic, that. But of course her actions are warranted because Waylon just happens to be a stalking psycho. Who knew? Yet, she glibly forgives a guy who claimed to be her friend (though we know he is) but was being paid to spy on her for 3 YEARS?? She won't give Cohen even the chance to talk though he sure seemed to show he's been a part of her life and taking care of her during all this time. I guess paying people to report back that you're doing o.k. and furthering your career by publishing your book is a prime example of NOT caring. Yeah, it was probably guilt driven initially, but a man's gotta start somewhere. Besides how many promises made in high school and college are actually kept? Let alone relationships kept, be it friends or otherwise? They weren't really even like an intense, intimate, on again-off again boyfriend/girlfriend. They were friends who made the mistake (especially in her case) of letting sex come into play. You learn, you move on. It's called life. Glad she got a back bone, though she comes off as somewhat juvenile. See where this is going. Seemed a bit cliche, the abrupt Waylon turned bad guy thing, just used to help wrap up the series. Thanks for the entertainment.

interesting.he still wants her,but cant stop fucking around,and will end up cheating on her,cos thats the way he is,she took and still takes his shit.then she wonders why he treats her the way she deserves.he's no good,fucks every thing that walks.and she needs someone who'll treat her proper.

Glad you updated...hope Cohen arrives soon to save the day.

you pissed me off with this one. You're such an effing drama queen it makes me want to do something stupid like shouting at my monitor, maybe. Readers choice to like the Waylon character more than the leading male must have upset you, 'cause his turn to villain was definetly "quick and dirty". Anyway, I too sense a certain immaturity in the female lead, she's how old now? (I kind of lost the timeline and don't want to check it, readers prerogative.) Yet she behaves as if still in mid-puberty. Oh there's one more thing, either you've got an editor or you're getting better at tidying up behind you, so thumbs up for that.

You lost me with this chapter. This story has officially gone off the rails! what is wrong with this girl? so immature and whiny! She just forgives Ryan like that? It's not believeable. And yes, it's getting very predictable indeed with the way Cohen is working his way back into her life, after all the shitty things he's done, of course you've set it up so he's gonna save the day, redeem himself and be the hero he's never and could really never be! And poor Waylon, the best of them all and you do this to him! Really???? I don't buy his sudden turn into a villan stalker, it seems way out of character with what you've set up in previous chapters. He's just a good guy who's fallen for the wrong girl. And what are you saying, that nice guys do indeed deserve to finish last and that the assholes deserve to have the best without any transformation on their part??? Not okay. This story had some promise, but it's definitely unraveling. Not to mention this latest offering was underdeveloped but yes, the editing has definitely improved. That's something at least.

did ur twin write the last 2 chapters girl? Why the storyline has waylon being the baddy? Remember u weren't s'ppose to make cohen the wanker the hero, it was s'ppose to be waylon, remember? lol bugger, pls, pls, pls, don't let lyn be a wuse and fall for cohen again in the next chapter, that man has got some major arse lickin to do, to have lyn back, and did waylon kiil johnny off?? anyways, about the other 2 readers comments, this story isn't all over the place, they just aren't in the zone are they? silly ppl, i'm a huge fan of this story girl, ur doing great, even tho' i want waylon to be the hero!! lol happy hols

I DISAGREE WITH PREVIOUS COMMENTS.I THINK THE STORY IS GETTING BETTER AT EACH CHAPTER!

I didn't see this last twist coming, and can't wait for an explanation both at waylon behavior but more importantly from Pierce.Obviously Waylon was talking about Johnny-Bravo?, but I think he lied-I can totally see Johnny split him in 2 if he showed his face as Pierce would't even give him the time of day..hehe

keep the chapters coming, I have no desire to see this end too soon,it's way too entertaining!

is way better than the one meryl and alec are starring in, i would watch this if it was a movie more than the big hollywood movie :D

Loving this story want to know what sent Waylon over the edge and why Cohen left in the first place. Thought that forgiving Ryan was a little to quick but i will get over next chapter soon please

it's been awhile!

three points : lyn needs to actualy act in a adult manner before she casts stones or has anger towards cohen. Cohen may or may not be a good guy , but good is a loose definition to some and i take it that his father caused him to push jay away (and for those who think he is whoring around, how many persons have a "rep" that for all intent and purposes are a fiction that they do not denounce because they are useful) and as for waylon the line between love love and obsession are at times very thin and the littlest things can cause that line to blur ( and all of us have seen that once or twice) so lets see what happens and then comment some more and P.S. its a story on line

Good chapter/series please continue.

I liked it! but, u made it like pretty much every guy in the storie was a player.

Hey, i just found your story and it's great! Are you planning on finishing? Update your user bio and let us know please!

Please say you are continuing this story. I know university and/or life can make continuing stories a pain in the ass, but this is a really good story; plus, it is really at a really, really good part. Please, pretty please continue.

Megan

Please hurry and update..one of teh BEST stories on this site!!

Cant wait to find out more!

WHY DO ALL AUTHORS HAVE TO LEAVE YOU HANGIN AT THA BEST PART...!!! I MEAN COULDN'T YOU HAVE KEPT GOIN FOR A LILTTLE WHILE LONGER...!!! MAYBE EVEN MADE IT 3 PAGES!!??!! LOL!!! PLEZ WRITE MORE SERIOUSLY THOUGH!!

Omg I loved it one word for ur writing....GENIUS !!!!

Continue!!! I need more!

P.s I would never have thought waylon to be the stalker killer THAT guy person

Please come back?

It's been forever, ad this is just too good to pass up!

u cant leave it like that at the most crucial part of the story !!1 u have to write more we need tohave the ending like NOW!!!!

ok. i have just finished reading this wonderful story..the twists and turns the drama it keeps you reading until the end...its been a long time in between chapters. my question to you is When will you be posting the next chapter????

you are such a great writer and im hooked on the story... you have to finish it... cant leave us all hanging like this lol

OMG I just started reading this story and its excellent I'm hoping you will be finishing it because I really want to know how it ends. I can't believe you left it hanging like that so please come back and give us the rest of the story thanks have a great evening!!

i hope the next chapter is out soon this was tooo good !!!

While reading Chapter 9 Im thinking... I'm nearing Chapter 11 and i don't think it's finished. I'm so hooked and them I get to Chapter 11, page 2 and all I can do is scream "NOoooooooooooooooo!"

oh please can we have the next Chapter ohh and I hope she makes Pierce suffer a little bit more too... Hahaha love this story and I can't WAIT for it to continue

Can't wait for more of this exciting story!!!! Please hurry, I know it's the Holidays, but this can be your Christmas present to me!! LOL.

You need to finish this story

Ugh!! Please. You can't just leave me like this! I'm too addicted. I [ politely ] demand that you finish the next chapter fast. I need to know what's going on! Is Cohen in there beating Fuller's ass? Is Cohen ever going to change? Are they going to have wild passionate sex? She will forgive him right?? I need more. Oh, and thanks for bringing Ryan back.

You have officially been added to my favorites. :]

This is too good. You have to finish. I must know what happened. Please please please finish the story and fast.

I was not going to comment but i just don't get it. i don't know what the excitement is about this story. the male lead is a total jerk with no redeeming qualities and the female lead is a idiot for being hooked on him. he treats all women including his "best friend" like crap, he is a hairs breath from being physically abusive to her. yet some commentators have said they want a guy like him. i don't get it. i think the writer was trying to create a strong male lead but failed. in fact every guy in the story needs to be thrown under the bus. i think its a bit sad that these jerks are celebrated. if you want to read a story featuring a strong male character then try Gabriel http://www.literotica.com/s/gabriel-ch-01 by Tangledinyou. or read anything by Shelley Laurenston or Linda Howard to name a few.

I thought I'd keep reading, hoping that it would pick up.

What. A. Dud.

good exciting!!!!!!!!! I want to read more please finish this story dot leave it hanging like this!!

I keep coming back to find the ending I really want to know what happens. Please don't leave us hanging

wit the fuck iz really going on can a person get a full storey ? wit's up wit these half written ass stories u can;t juswt leave a bitch hanging like that please finish thiz storey

listen if u guys aren't going to finish ur stories then just dont bother writing them at all. this is the third un finished story i've read today.

OMG I MUST KNO WHAT HAPPENED !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

This story is unfinished and has been for almost 2 years. I actually liked it alot. Even if the chapters were short and the writting raw. I'm gonna start writting tonight and hope to have it up by this week. No longer than tuesday or thursday! Just look at my page for updates! And comment if you like it.

hurry up

im begging you. you need to finish this.

Please finish...love it!

Please please finish this!!

I was enjoyn d bk so much nd i gt to chapter 11 nd its nt finishd. Crap

please finish!! :)

Omgosh.. no I need the rest

FINISH!!!

Oh PRETTY PLZZZZZZZ CAN U FINISH

I PROMISE ILL BE GOOD AND GIVE ALL YOUR STORIES 5 STARS. JUST COME BACK AND GIVE US MORRRREEEEEE!!

PLEASE YOU MUST FINISH. IM ON THE EDGE OF MY SEAT HERE....

That's what i hate about these unfinished stories! I get roped in to be let down! Alt like life. Lol

Finish the story! How can you do this to people who read all your chapters? It's not fair. Please finish it.