by MISSUNAPPROACHABLE
Was able to picture the whole event. Reminded me of a past of my own before
Well written with great descriptions of sex
Just don't see why you described it as a romance.
A guy comes to familiar turf from out of state for a couple of days and figures he'll see if that hot piece of ass from a few years ago is still available. She is and they get together and have some good sex. They kiss and hug and he does what he came for and then turns around and goes home. They smile and think what a good time they had and that's the end of it. A pointless story of good sex and a hollow interaction. If that's what life is about we should all be disappointed. It's going to be a lonely life if that's the way you play it. 3* for a well written piece, but it's only worth 1* if there was a point intended.
there is, then it is an erotic coupling not a romance, so you've aimed this at the wrong audience.