All Comments on 'It's Over'

Not sure what u were trying to accomplish here but should've had more details to help ur plot

That was about as exciting as watching the lawn grow.

Decent story, maybe go a little deeper in the darkness the mind goes after a hard breakup?

"I should imagine, I imagine" - Why imagine, tell us what she did,and not in present tense.

Not very informative.

What did I think of this story ?

What story ! There are barely enough words to comment on .

If this is your best effort , give it up . Writing is not for you .

DK .

No stars ..... but I couldn't pass this without leaving a comment .

Were they even married? Too short and little background made this a poor effort.

Same as MasterKote, not sure what you were trying to accomplish.

What was that? For sure not an erotic story. Some kind of masochistic flagellation? Put this story in a different category, like bdsMMMMM.

Maybe dude should get his own life and stop dwelling on hers.

Using the omnipresent narrator who looks down on the scene and describes it. How did the narrator know these details of his wife his girl friend, whatever, and what she was doing? Too much left out.

Just a bunch of bull shit.

It's okay!

3

1*.

That's all I can say.

I mean it was well written for what it was, but to be honest, it was a sad sack of a story and we have no idea how the ex-husband/boyfriend feels about anything, just his description of what he imagines is happening. Though why he would be upset is anyone's guess, an alcoholic wife who gets smashed every Saturday is no loss.

Another femdom fantasy ended with a very low readers rating.

She’s your ex! She ain’t your problem anymore. Who cares if she’s humping the vacuum cleaner or pulling a train with the entire NFL? Move on.