All Comments on 'Ivy League at Any Cost'

Great introduction! Continue please...

5 stars for this chapter. I hope the second one is coming soon. Pappasleaze!

Thanks! First time writer. Next one submitted.

Looks very promising. I hope this is the introductory chapter to a multi-chapter series (though the title does not suggest this is the case). Many interesting themes are introduced but not yet developed. One minor but repeated editing problem: you omit the final e on the verb "breathe."

Interesting setup - hope the flagged plot potential materializes in future chapters. Like lots of games and intrigues within the sorority, hinted at by the dynamics between Liz and McKayla, and in humiliating use of the pledge slaves. All the best!

@Peter_Cleveland thanks for the feedback. I've probably made that mistake every time for my whole my adult life. Will try to fix in the future.

Wonderful start.

Thanks!

This is a great beginning as it very clearly sets up and states the reason for all of the sexy situations to follow. Very well done and will be following.