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All Comments on 'Jake and Alex Ch. 01'

by aporter121

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dnsontndnsontn11 months ago

This is a really well constructed story! The way you write desire and intimacy I can live with some typos. Hope you’ll carry on sharing your words.

NaplesjoeNaplesjoe10 months ago

Yes, please. Your story built up and ended so beautifully and romantically. I’d like to hear more, please.

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

Loved it! Not gonna lie, this is now one of my favorite stories here.

Sweetly romantic but still very hot! A positive relationship is a nice change of pace.

A few typos, but still very well written. Please, write more! We need more stories like this!

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I have always loved reading erotic and taboo stories and now I am trying to bring my fantasies to life in my stories. I will also write other people’s stories. I love getting feedback to know what I can do better or what you liked.