All Comments on 'Jamie Makes Three'

A very erotic relationship. No cuckery, just love between all three.

Definitely needs a good copy edit. The bones are good, and it sounds like mostly fun (not a bondage here), but ... the grammatical and other stumbles bump me out of the story. With some clean-up it could be excellent. Hope you get it.

Why not just put it with the rest of the Hector series?

enjoyed but agree the errors interfer with the flow