by TaraTraynor
The terrible spelling made this so annoying that I couldn’t finish reading what could have been a great story. Please have someone edit and correct before publishing.
Fantastic post! Looking forward to reading your next chapter!
Keep enjoying yourself and smiling!
Wow what a great read...how do people that write come up with story's like that and put it into well expressed words.luv a good story and this was a good one.thanks
I like the concept of the story. The contest. The foreign settings.
. I would have Enjoyed a bit more background on the two of you. Body descriptions - petite but curvy redhead. That kind of thing. Personality descriptions. You could easily expand this where each city is a chapter
I enjoyed it - 4 stars
Lovely sexy story - I could do with some of that knitting and flower arranging too! Looking forward to hearing more
Brilliant story. Reminds me of some wonderful memories during my time in the world of tennis.