by Bardot1990
pathetic effort in writing, really messed up, don't know whether you think you writing in a black speak or what but it is really bad and a joke. Quit trying to write like someone else.
I understand the reason for the way its written, but i think you went a little overboard. It made it too hard to read, no flow at all. I contend that the southern Belles would not speak with that improper of English. Just an opinion. I really wanted to read this, but it was just too difficult. Thanks for the attempt. .
Bardot1990, I wanted to read this, too, and absolutely loved it. You imparted what YOU believe is the language of that day, and that's all that counts.