All Comments on 'Janine - First Love'

Thank you Janine. This really resonated with me.

I have been looking forward to reading this story. It was well worth the wait! Thanks!

After chatting with you in the chat rooms, I finally came back to finish this arousing story. It was great!! I look forward to seeing more from you, Janine.

Loved every word. Lust was inspired for sure. Thanks "Jesus Christ and Oh My fucking God" once more. Loved it.

Hot story. Well written. Really, really excellent. Thank you.

Very erotic! Thanks for alerting me to it. Looking forward to your next one!

I like your writing style. I hope you keep on writing here.

Beautiful story. Lovely chatting with you shame it ended abruptly. Looking forward to the new stories you have in the works

Lets begin with an admission. I'm an atheist. But that doesn't stop me from appreciating a lovely well written story that flowed along nicely . I get the female on female situation implicitly and sometimes think we guys are lucky to get a look in. A couple of small typo's but well worth 5*. Well done.

You have style. "I watched". Great use of repetition. You have writing talent!

Great...hot...story. I like the way you write...seems open and believable and very hot.

Look forward to more submissions by you.

Love your style…keep writing …well done

Janine,

keep on writing or posting.

nice stories.

Great story, and it was great to chat to you today. Keep on writing!

I loved this story, that feeling of awakening, that feeling of something new. And certainly something sexy.

Very erotic. Your writing aroused my mind and body. Winning,

Incredibly erotic and intense writing. It made me sing to the same tune.

A very erotic sexy story, Jessica. I hope you took things further?

I will begin by confirming I'm an atheist. I found this to be a beautiful story of a girl's self discovery. Nicely written and well paced. I'm sure you will be able to expand on Janine's further education either with Chloe or someone else. I would admit to a jealousy of Chloe, the thought of girl on girl is arousing and almost makes me wonder why men are needed. Good luck with your future writing. A.

To Westman99

Where does your self hate come from? Twice you commented on this story to let people know that you believe men are not needed. Your mind has been twisted and you are oblivious to it.

Good story. You are very descriptive of your feelings in the moment. I like that. Definitely raised my pulse rate.

Special, sensual, super erotic.

Amazingly good.

Thank you.

Felt like Inwas there watching and listening to everything. Well written and developed.

Beautifully written short story and so erotic.

Everything you said it would be. Well done.