All Comments on 'Jayden's Wiggly Friends'

I would appreciate any feedback on my first story to improve my writing. Or if I should continue this story. Thank you!

No complaints from me. Your story turned out great! You should definitely continue the story!

Or maybe make another story with slime? A girl gets slime on her chest and goes through some breast expansion?

A endowed girl is on a beach and sees a huge slug looking for food and lets it near her pussy and drink her juices?

Pls add another part I love the filthy worms and mud she could find another big big worm and keep it in her ass while she hikes through the forest. Slugs fucking her next would be amazing or maybe smaller animals like mister squirrels buddy's. Either way incredibly hot.