All Comments on 'Jayne's World Pt. 18'

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MigbirdMigbird8 months ago

Build up, dialogue/reflections while making out in simmering way — so tumescent. Very erotic; how can you not love Jayne’s world — her sassy attitude, willingness to explore and her charged libido. Creative erotic fiction -nice.

Wiz1002Wiz10028 months ago

Extremely aroused chapter. Whilst I find the photo shoots to come across as quite seedy affairs, even though Jaynes exhibitionist needs reacts so positively to being in those situations, the interaction between her and James as the session is retold is fantastic. They now seem to fully understand each other, and themselves.

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Thoroughly enjoying my return to Lit, both writing stories and chatting. Love to hear from anyone who reads my stories and has any comments to make both positive and negative but please not anonymously! I am getting used to being separated and despite the lockdowns enjoying m...

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