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HandcuffGirlHandcuffGirlabout 7 years agoAuthor
Missing plot point

Hello Everyone,

This has bothered me for a long time. When I wrote this l left something out. After Kani was killed, the Mando Commander was supposed to remind Daala that if she (Daala) would have gotten Kani to wear the tracking collar, they wouldn't have had to get so close before firing the rocket at Javis, and they wouldn't have been discovered. Daala was supposed to put the collar on Kani knowing that Kani would be with Javis, so she could kill him. - handcuffgirl

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