by Maisy_P
Definitely hot. Also felt a little bit like an erotic horror story/nightmare, but that's probably just me because while I like pregnancy, the idea of having 4 plus kids fills me with anxiety.
Her husband is kind of creepy. She should divorce him, leave him the brats and go back to work. See how he likes it. Maybe he should take up with her fucked up mom. He married above him, knocked her up, ruined her body and now o one even looks at her all fat with a litter of !life killers.
Another perfect story, dark, fetishistic, but beautiful. I don't understand people who comment "she should divorce him!" on fetish stories like this, this is a perfect story of a villain winning
Too dark for my tastes. While Ted would appear to be a good husband on the surface, I didn’t read anything about him helping out with the children. I guess that I would have preferred less Fetishism and more Romance.
I have to ask, just what in the hell is "epxneisce"?
"Lately, she noticed the epxneisce tailored skirt suits she wore to the office..."
I suspect this was an overlooked spelling error. 😳 There was also an error when you used "hear" for "here" or vice-versa. 🤔 But your proofreading was above average even so. 2/5
Hard to believe a career woman does not take birth control pills, use an IUD, or take other steps to avoid pregnancy.
So good to read a story about a woman finally coming to realize what is all women's true purpose!
While I enjoyed the story it seemed to end on a melancholy note. Jen seemed to morn the life she had wanted and worked for though she did seem to embrace motherhood.
The babies were too close to be healthy for her.theres a reason pregnancies are supposed to be spread out
Nicely done! I rather love a story that has lust mixed in with realistic regrets and consequences.