All Comments on 'Jenny Ch. 01'

Great start, can't wait to read more. 5 Stars.

Well, a good start to many adventures for Jenny.

Really? That's what comes out of such a fucked up event?

WOW What a hot naughty story. The woman was such a slut.

Loved it Looking forward to part 2

This is super well written. Do a full series with this but not all around the homeless dude. Get her seeking out fucked up situations and shit that spirals out of control.

I missed the plausible part.

I think Jenny's bound to be eating some Emily pussy to arrange for time off to get her throat and pussy filled with better cock than hubby's.

Enjoyed and this story. Keep writing. Thanks for using your mind instead of AI as most "new" Lit authors seem to be doing.

Awesome. Being from Nor Cal, always fun and an added bonus.

This story was so hot. Well written and a great story. Excellent first offering! Can't wait to read more about Jenny .

Highly implausible and numerous typos and grammatical mistakes make me wish you would use an editor to help you with your future tales; however, with that, I found your tale to be nice and raunchy enough to make me hard. I especially enjoyed the transformation of Jennifer from a conservative wife into an unbridled sexual being, so kudos to you, sir!

Great story! 5 stars. I would give you more if I could. I hope you continue to write a lot more chapters about Jennys sexual adventures. I like how you are being realistic on the homeless guy having a 6 inch cock. It is a turnoff when authors say he has an 11 inch cock. Anything over 71/2 inches is laughable.

Dumb

This kind of story only works because BOOKS DON’T SMELL!

Please, this is unecessary:

She was getting a little wet between her legs. How could her body betray her like this?

Please, don't do this:

She couldn't believe how turned on she was getting.

And this:

She knew this was wrong but he was making her feel very good. Better than she has felt in a ling time. She responded by sucking his cock deeper.

Have you ever got close to a homeless dirty old man?