by NorCalPerv
Brilliant please please write the next chapter soon, love to see how Jenny's life turns for the worst, and daddy takes more control and hopefully more meth
Great story. Please don't end her journey like that. Please finish her journey
The only problem I have with the drugs usage is because she’s a mother, but if the purpose is to show total degradation, you’re doing it. But real life already sucks with mothers leaving their kids for drugs, fiction doesn’t need to do the same terrible thread.
I dunno, man. This one just didn't do it for me. Mostly the encounter in the park. This had a lot of potential but it's gone off the rails for me a bit.
I like it better than the initial 5th chapter. I hope to see more of her with Leroy.
Every day I see homeless on Kensington Ave on fentanyl and tranquilizer. Would like to see Jenny's progression to this state. Love the riches to rags theme.
Definitely want more of Jenny, was really surprised by the drugs, meth is the worst.
And the rapist was unexpected.
However the Tom & Toad scene how they used her was definitely hot.
This particular chapter had quite a few errors in it as well.
Please continue with her being used sexually against her will, not crazy about the drugs and totally degradation of her.
Encounters of new clients taking advantage of her instead of turning her into a zombie.