All Comments on 'Jenny Ch. 05'

by NorCalPerv

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shewantsmoreshewantsmore9 months ago

Brilliant please please write the next chapter soon, love to see how Jenny's life turns for the worst, and daddy takes more control and hopefully more meth

JackiemichelleJackiemichelle9 months ago

Great story. Please don't end her journey like that. Please finish her journey

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

The only problem I have with the drugs usage is because she’s a mother, but if the purpose is to show total degradation, you’re doing it. But real life already sucks with mothers leaving their kids for drugs, fiction doesn’t need to do the same terrible thread.

Striker426Striker4269 months ago

I dunno, man. This one just didn't do it for me. Mostly the encounter in the park. This had a lot of potential but it's gone off the rails for me a bit.

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

Love the drug use and want to see her fall further into depravity!

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

Can't wait to see how far Jenny falls!

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

I like it better than the initial 5th chapter. I hope to see more of her with Leroy.

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

Every day I see homeless on Kensington Ave on fentanyl and tranquilizer. Would like to see Jenny's progression to this state. Love the riches to rags theme.

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

Love the writing. I think Jenny's story is very erotic. Keep it up!

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

Can’t wait for chapter 6.

SwewxxxSwewxxx6 months ago

You have a great ass!

You have a nice ass!

What an ass!!

But nobody fuck it.

AnonymousAnonymous2 months ago

Sloppy writing honestly.

merrySMmerrySM26 days ago

Definitely want more of Jenny, was really surprised by the drugs, meth is the worst.

And the rapist was unexpected.

However the Tom & Toad scene how they used her was definitely hot.

This particular chapter had quite a few errors in it as well.

Please continue with her being used sexually against her will, not crazy about the drugs and totally degradation of her.

Encounters of new clients taking advantage of her instead of turning her into a zombie.

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