All Comments on 'Jenny Learns to Behave'

Were you homeschooled by a HS dropout or are you simply from the South?

Have you taken on a female persona to seem edgy or are you simply a male mysoginist?

Questions abound but a few things are clear. You obviously never learned basic English grammar. Have you never seen a piece of prose fiction where dialogue was set aside by quotation marks (“like this”)? What 3rd grader doesn’t know that?

Your use of the comma is as random and perfunctory as truths spoken by the Orange Menace (D.J. Drumph).

Show us on the doll how you learned to hate women.

I had to stop reading, not sure what you are doing with the grammar and the quotes, but you lost me

The mechanics do need a little work, but I've seen much, much worse.

I do like the storyline. I went looking for a second page - lol! (Hint, hint.)