All Comments on 'Jenny's Kinky Desires Ch. 04'

I'd never really noticed the odd wording of this story before when reading through the other parts, but here it just kept leaping out all the time, from the beginning where concise is used to describe a dress and all the way to the end where watched and watching are used but aren't right for the description of what happening.

I would implore you to get an editor for the next part, so you can make this story even better.

Yet this is ramping up in a most exciting way. I just don't know why you ended it there, instead of at an earlier stage. It's a very minor thought. I love the story.

I will continue the adventures of Jenny

Just loving everything about it. The taboo, the fetish, the development...

Personal fav!

Sexy, Nasty Cumdump Slut, and; dumb jenny Didn't Write This Story In First Person! Sooo, Sandra Must Have Written This AS jenny! Perhaps You Are Sandra? This With Your Local English Is THE Best Humiliation Degradation Story I've Ever Read On LITEROTICA! Glad Your Continuing jenny's Story!

VERY GOOD STORY SOME WORDS & PHRASES NEED SOME WORK, THE MORE YOU USE ENGLISH THE EASIER IT WILL GET SO, PLEASE CONTINUE WRITING. WELL DONE.

Just finished this great story so far hope to read move soon

I love the story and am really hoping that there's more to cum... Mistress Adriana seems like she will really enjoy getting to play with her new friends dolly. Please continue...

Really good, couldn't stop reading it !!