All Comments on 'Jenny's Summer Ch. 01'

This is going to be a fucking great holiday!

Nice setting of scenes. And I agree with the previous poster; it looks very promising! :)

What color are Jenny's eyes, how tall is she, is

she light skinned? What color is her hair?

Is she thin or well proportioned, does she

have a button nose or is she ugly and tall and

gangly, with a wart on her nose and pimply faced?

You missed one of the most important parts of

the story, since she is main character?

Sorry, her hair is brown and long.

I'm an idiot I admit, but thanks for

writing stories for us. I appreciate

your efforts. Pleas forgive my

previous comments, as you described

Jenny nicely in Chapter 2.

An 18 year old virgin, those are rare, I assume that will be rectified in the next chapter or two! A well thought out and written story. I look forward to reading the next chapter. I appreciate your and your Muse's imagination (memory?) and abilities to bring it to your story. Thank you for sharing your vision and talents.