by fieryjen
An 18 year old virgin, those are rare, I assume that will be rectified in the next chapter or two! A well thought out and written story. I look forward to reading the next chapter. I appreciate your and your Muse's imagination (memory?) and abilities to bring it to your story. Thank you for sharing your vision and talents.
I'm an idiot I admit, but thanks for
writing stories for us. I appreciate
your efforts. Pleas forgive my
previous comments, as you described
Jenny nicely in Chapter 2.
What color are Jenny's eyes, how tall is she, is
she light skinned? What color is her hair?
Is she thin or well proportioned, does she
have a button nose or is she ugly and tall and
gangly, with a wart on her nose and pimply faced?
You missed one of the most important parts of
the story, since she is main character?
Nice setting of scenes. And I agree with the previous poster; it looks very promising! :)