All Comments on 'Jewels's Jealous'

Love it! Keep going! Have the husband prefer Ally and start to push the wife into second place. Have the wife compete for his attention and go to crazy lengths. Get Ally pregnant again very quickly.

I like this as an ending, a little smile between friends and lovers, with potential either for Jewel to rebuild her loving relationship with each of them (which would be satisfying and feel good), or to remain confused and bitter (which can be a turn on but leaves a bad taste)

Please continue

Continue, I know it might be a lot but a sliding doors of J and A reconciling or where it becomes even more toxic and competitive.

I'd love to see a third woman get mixed in somehow. Maybe a sister of ally or jewel, or an ex

I hope we get a heavily pregnant Jewel doing the same thing to Ally leading to them competing with eachother. Preggo threesomes anyone?

I liked the story, but the ending makes the viewer crave for more. We need a part two maybe with A and J working on there differences and moving all in together and growing a huge family but with the competition still. Maybe even a fourth member as well?

Do a part 2 where they’ve reconciled. A threesome with a heavily pregnant jewels and lactating ally would be amazing

Back in1979 I worked with a very attractive woman.

She wore silk blouses which were then popular. And , as I recall, often went braless...again something fairly common at the time.

She was divorced with a young son.

One day she explained her situation.

She married a psychologist.

Soon, they added another woman to their famiky, they slept together in the same bed.

(No, I didn't ask about that!).

Eventually, she got pregnant.

The other woman became jealous so she purposely became pregnant.

Well, that led to issues and she eventually left and got a divorce.

I was young and very naive, so all this was a bit of a shock.

So, not all polyamorous relationships have happy endings.

Please do continue! There should be a hierarchy established as to who the top babymama is, based on who’s better in bed. Winner gets him first, loser has to clean him off and get whatever’s left in his drained balls.

Good story, fun although I get Jewels' grievances with the MC's character. "Threesum" took me right out of things though. It's a stylistic choice, I get that, but for me at least it was grating.

Interesting story, but Jewel is very, very unsympathetic. She comes across as a raging bitch. We're not shown any real reason that he'd be better off with Jewel than Ally.

Next chapter please! I enjoy your writing style.

I hope a third chapter is made and that the two women get along again as cum-hungry broodmares pumping out babies together.