All Comments on 'Jill's Past? Ch. 05'

this was basically 7 pages of sex with a page of narrative thrown in. Although well written, you can only do so much so many ways, it gets a bit old and samey. I love the parts where the wife and husband interplay, the banter that sets up the sex.

Lots of sex but it's all good. Lots of extraneous detail, too. I was hoping their new soccer friends were the real Adam and Ashley but that would be too much of a coincidence, even here. I better go back and read the previous chapters. 5.

Hot story but in real life it’s not the norm . When younger you want to use , fuck and totally enjoy fucking as many of the whore , slut pigs you can . Have fun like the guys at the lake we’re doing but not marry them . We all want to do it all with the pigs that put out any way possible and hopefully marry the nice girl who didn’t get used a lot like a street corner hooker . This poor bastard finds out three kids and over a decade later that his wife was a total used up pig that actually was acting like this while they were together. Hard to swallow but he’s committed now and has to live with it and use it to spark there sex life or suffer knowing it all . This would be a hard thing to swallow for me but you know the old saying when talking about past partners guys tend to multiple by 3 and girls divide to try to keep there reputation in tact . All of the biggest pigs growing up all had to find guys from out of the area to marry . Hot story looking for the continued details

Even if sometimes there are many sex scenes, you can only marvel and respect their openness toward each others. Many strive for it, few reach it. Entertaining stories, thanks for sharing!

Thank you for sharing your story. It's well written with super hot sex scenes. Personally, I'd love to hear more...perhaps the story behind the other two visits / the remaining Polaroids?

Two people who are married who have an openness and fondness for sex. It sounds as though the author has put a great deal of thought into their writing, and enjoys telling these stories very much! Good for them!!!

I loved reading this story. Great characters. The only thing I didn’t like about it (this is only a personal view and in no way is a critique against the author) is that I didn’t like how Jill was being manipulative of Ty, especially with knowingly using Ashly’s name in place of Christine because she felt that’s what her husband wanted to hear. Also by making him think she was inviting “Adam & Ashley” over for a party. My ex wife was similarly manipulative, telling me what I wanted to hear or do, making me believe that she was serious, knowing full well that she would never do it. It is a bit of a trigger for me.

That all being said, it is a wonderful story, and I hope it continues, or at least hope that the author continues to write for our entertainment.