All Comments on 'Joanne's Fall Pt. 19 - The New Job'

What a wonderful continuation to a great story. I can’t wait for Joanne to get her boob job that she doesn’t want. She’s going to look cheaper and sluttier than she already is.

I do love this story, looking forward to the next part.

can't wait for the boob job.

Will be amazing if they will go huge fake balloons and not just an uplift

we gotta humiliate her further #booblover

good stuff...Thanks for writing

Wow! First Michelle, then white Ryan becomes Jo’s submissive - she even surprised herself how easy it was to be a dom. And then, Jason and Claire do decide that Jo needs a boob job for higher, firmer, tits. But Jo will have to pay for it. Then the story takes a big jump sideways. Just as it looked like Joanne’s degradation was going to continue downhill, Alexia, the stripper comes along. When Jo asks if she could get a job as a stripper (to pay for a boob job), Alexia replies, “ I'll ask the boss but with a body like yours, I don't see why not." Perhaps Alexia’s boss would like Jo’s body so much he/she would front the money for a boob job to make it even better. As Jo has earlier reflected, a good job would cost a lot. As a stripper with bigger, firmer, tits Jason and Claire would be happy and Jo could earn a lot of money as a stripper. This opens all kinds of possibilities for Jo. Love where this may be going.

Amazing story. You keep creating imagination and creating a wonderful story every time. It is interesting for Jo to get two jobs and fail to work as a waitress. By the end of the year, she must have experience in a CV as a waitress. Thinking about selling her car to get a boob job is a wonderful thing. The doctor will put silicone in the boob jo and will tighten the skin for the boob jo to make it look youthful. More and more, her travel to Thailand or any country where the cost of the operation is cheap is a fun thing. She appears in Asia in a more and more promiscuous form. She is sold to one of the clubs to work as a prostitute. After a month, she is able to escape. She appears in club advertisements in the streets of Asia. She also gets an offer with a boob job to inject collagen into the anal. To appear larger and more harmonious and force you to get more tan. But the best scenario before this scenario is that she works hard as a waitress and slowly loses her company, her job, and her respect. She gets used to working as a waitress during three chapters of this story. It is also exciting that she goes to work as a plumber or a saleswoman in a local bar, collects money hard, and goes to travel to Asia. You can create endless scenarios from this exciting story. You present a great story

“Jo had admitted to herself that she was a slut. Sure, she still hated some of the stuff that Jason and Claire made her do. But especially since she was single, she knew she loved getting fucked.”

Stripping will likely give her the opportunity to whore for the Castle Club when she isn’t stripping, She will hâte what her body craves.

“Ryan, Tom can't..." Jo went to speak again but again, Ryan interrupted her.

"He will be fine, trust me." Ryan said with a loving smile.”

These lines suggest that Tom has already spoken with Ryan, and Tom may already consider his mom as a whore and wants to fuck her. I wonder if Tom frequents the Castle Club in the next town?

With her unwanted big new boobs Jo will be a star at the Castle Club, and will probably come to enjoy displaying her body to men who want to fuck her. Even as she feels more like a depraved slut and whore, she may embrace her now totally transformed body and the power it gives her over men. Ryan may be just the beginning!

“I've cum, you can go," She said without even looking at him, "I'll call you next time I need you."

I love the new dom side of Jo.

Nice chapter but I hope white Ryan takes control again and Joanne gets fucked as a stripper.

A slut, a whore, and now a stripper, soon with huge tits. How more humiliating can it get for Jo, except that she loves all rhe sex she is now getting, and seemingly cannot get enough. She has become insatiable. I love the story, and the dialogue, including Jo’s unspoken thoughts.

I can imagine Jo as an older version of pornstar Summer Brielle. Slim body, filled lips, and huge tits. Add Jo’s tattoos and piercings. What a stripper she would make!

So much in this cfhapter. This, however, from the last chapter:

“[Jo] wore a tight, grey pencil skirt and a white blouse. . . .Sitting down at her desk in her office, she got a glimpse of herself in the reflection of the computer screen before it turned on. Her slim face with a good jaw line, no hanging double chin. Thick, plump lips and blonde hair. That was who she had become, the old Joanne was well and truly gone.”

Now we know that despite everything that she is made to do, Jo really likes how hot and sexy she now looks. Both of her young lovers also love her slim, fit, and decorated body. And now Alexia, a “dancer” at the Castle Club tells Jo that “with a body like yours” she should have no trouble getting a job as a stripper. I know that my speculations are jumping far ahead, but after Jo gets her enhanced big tits, and thanks to her regular gym workouts with black Ryan, she will truly have a pornstar body. Could stripping lead to an offer to act in a legitimate porn video? Or could Jo find that making her own OnlyFans videos is more lucrative? Either way, Jo may simply move on to a place where Jason and Claire no longer have any leverage over her. Tom may accept and even embrace what Jo has become - he could even become one of her lovers. Jo could overcome any initial shame at incest, as we know that she loved his big cock when he unknowingly fucked her. Thanks to white Ryan, Tom may already be enthusiastic to fuck his very sexy and busty mom.

If the many obstacles facing Jo could be overcome, Jo could very well be a perfect fit in the booming MILF or even fetish porn video categories. It would be great if Jo ended up doing something like this because she can earn a lot of money doing what she loves and is really good at (Jo had worried about what her CV now looks like; for the porn industry, expert deep throat cocksucker and three hole slut would be a plus in her CV). Her business skills could lead to work in the production end where she could be very successful for many years. Joanne’s fall could lead to hot Jo’s rise. These are my speculations for this wonderful story; the author has opened the door to new possibilities, and I have no doubt that he will take Jo in a direction that I certainly could not imagine. Love the story.

It is wonderful, it is an exciting and wonderful story. Send Jo to learn the profession of shaving for men. She wears a short skirt and a tight shirt while she works and broadcasts her work for hours on Tik Tok to collect money for the operation.

Can’t wait for the next chapter, hope it comes out soon.

It's interesting that Jo works as a waitress wearing tight jeans and a tight shirt. Jason must take over Jo's company for free, hire a new manager, and Jo becomes a receptionist at her previous company. In addition to her work as a waitress in a strip club with Alexa, Jo serves drinks and beer to customers and cleans rooms. At the club, day and night, she works in her former company as a receptionist and secretary. A number of employees who submitted their resignation return to work again and look at Jo with insult and contempt. Jo works hard to collect money. Fat is suctioned from her breasts and then they implant silicone in her so that she looks as if she is twenty years old as well. Putting fat in her buttocks, injecting fillers into her cheeks and forehead, putting piercings and rings in her nose and navel, and putting tattoos on her fingers. She should look thirty or twenty years old.

How long will it take for Jo to be eager to dance and display her nude body to an audience of horny men? Not long, I imagine, and she will soon get the money for her breast enhancement. I would not be surprised if she continued stripping, now with her huge tits standing high and firm on her chest, and earning more and more. Meanwhile, Jason undoubtedly has his own plans for the super hot and very top-heavy Jo. Can’t wait to see where this story goes.

“You want to be a stripper?" Alexia asked back.

No, I fucking don't.... but I need money. And a waitress job might just pay the bills, but it won't pay for the boob job I'm being forced to have.

"Yes, I do." Jo answered back to her.”

Jo does what she has to do without a lot of second-guessing. She has accepted that she will get a boob job and will be a stripper, much as she dislikes what she has to do. She just does it. The author has indeed created an incredible character.

“Jo thought about when Neil forced that giant dildo into her arsehole, finally, someone else would know what that feels like.

Truthfully, this dildo was fucking tiny compared to that, it was only the width of three fingers, but it was the power that Jo was enjoying.”

After all the blackmail, Jo loves dominating young Ryan. This is a wonderful scene, showing a new side to the sexually self-confident slut Jo.

Jo now seems to enjoy looking at her 47-year old but very hot body in the mirror. She also gets very pleased when the two young Ryan's look at her body with lust. Does she harbor exhibitionist tendencies that could emerge when she starts her new job as a stripper? I am continually surprised at the many sides Jo that are emerging and this could be another one that could reveal itself in coming chapters.

The scenario that you present in this story is an enjoyable scenario. The development of Jo’s story is regular. You feel during the story with Jo that she feels all her emotions and feelings towards her masters. I recommend that you send Joe and Michelle to travel to Asia, Taiwan, Thailand, or the Philippines to get plastic surgery on their boobs and face. This flight contains transit stations and multiple stops in Milan, Istanbul, or the Middle East. During the stops for days, Jo goes to a hostel in a shared room with girls and boys. During her stay in the hostel, he will have sex with her. It is wonderful that Jo is able to become pregnant in Asia and have sex with her. An Asian boy and she becomes pregnant with an Asian child. I liked the deterioration of Jo’s job and her loss of her company and her attempt to work in a strip club. I hope to see more events in the next chapter that her business deteriorates quickly and she loses respect and appreciation in the company and the neighborhood. It is great to focus on Jo’s clothes. What she is wearing? It is interesting to see She wears a thong bikini between her anal cheeks and goes to the beach to become more tanned. Ryan takes her to the store wearing sexy clothes, forces her to buy beer, and has sex with her on the sidewalk in an area outside the city. These are all suggestions and it is up to you. You create this great story. Please continue until part 1000

great story

Good writing

You provide an excellent narration of this story. I propose that Jo's identity be stolen, and she be punished by Claire. She and the prostitute who works with the gang exchange identities. The prostitute becomes named Jo and loses her company. Plastic surgery must be performed on a twenty-year-old girl.

It is easy to see how Jo, now a stripper,

could come to embrace her new lifted and enhanced tits. They would make her now slim,

fit, tanned, toned, tattooed, and pierced body look even sexier and more youthful. Jo would

love how she now looks. But what are Jason and Claire's plans for their beautiful submissive slut and whore, now that she has the body of a young pornstar with a huge pair of tits?

Beautiful story, I encourage you to continue

This story is entertaining. I can't wait for the next part. What a creative writer and author. My opinion is that she should focus on Jo’s rejection of herself. The prostitute still clings to her morals. She is ashamed to wear denim shorts and tight jeans and expose her stomach, even though her master forces her to walk in these clothes in the street. I suggest that Joanne go to work in the restaurant where she met Neil for the first time and become a A colleague of his works the morning shift. Also, as a result of exercising in the gym, she should have abdominal muscles, her thighs will become more toned, and her buttocks will become larger. It's great. Joanne goes from the apartment to the beach on foot and she's wearing short jean shorts and a bikini. She thinks everyone is watching and she lies on the beach and a random guy rubs oil on Joanne's body. He touches her anal and boobs and at the end of the sunny day she gets tan lines. Also, orgies are a beautiful story path. Joan joins dozens of boys and girls and shemales have wild sex with her and urinate on her. She goes to the bathroom with the shemales and sits with them to defecate while the bathroom door is open. She sleeps with the shemales until the morning. The same goes for going to a public swimming pool. There are hundreds of paths and events for this story. Fun and wonderful, enlightening in its presentation and writing

It seems that every time either of the two Ryan's, and perhaps even Jason, fuck Jo, she compares them to Dwayne, with his "perfect cock," but who "betrayed" her. Jo's feelings toward Dwayne are closer to love than they are

with anyone else in the story. It appears that he won't disappear completely from the story, which is a good thing, as he really likes her too.

The change in Jo's job makes for an interesting story path. My point of view is that it is wonderful for Jo to become a receptionist or cleaning lady in her previous company, which was owned by her and is now owned by Sara, the former employee. One of the employees comes and takes Jo to the kitchen inside the company and has sex with her mouth. And ass and forces her to come to work wearing tight, sexy clothes, jeans and a tight blouse, and to sway her big butt. Also, Jo must become a media face for the gym. Ryan Al-Aswad films her wearing yoga leggings while she is exercising, and the gym members watch her on Facebook.

Jo’s new self-confidence and urge to control Ryan, who could be seen as a possible stand-in for men in her life open new possibilities for Jo, even as she is the sex-slave of Jason. Her new and very youthful body, fully decorated, and her soon-to-be new and likely bigger tits also open new possibilities for Jason, and for Jo herself. I love that Alexia and the stripper job have entered the story, as they point to Jo’s bi-sexuality (think her budding close relationship with Michelle). The author has given us numerous sexual partners of both sexes for Jo, all of whom create opportunities for twists and turns that make this story so good.

“Wife, mother, business owner.... Prostitute, waitress, stripper. Can I sink any lower than this?”

There is another way Jo can look at what she has done: With her brains and her body, she can do it all.

Your story is very good. You are an inspiring person. You talked about Jo’s work as a waitress. She will search for a job and send the CV to the restaurant where Neil works, where he returns again to blackmail her and asks her to come and share accommodation with him in his apartment where he and a group of boys and girls who study in live. the college. Neil and his colleagues slap Jo's ass while she is preparing breakfast for herself in the morning in the kitchen, and Neil takes her to have a joint shower for both of them. She continues to be ashamed of herself and her slutty, teenage clothes. She still disguises herself as the new Jo when she goes to the pharmacy to buy condoms and when she goes to the supermarket to buy beer and a pack of cigarettes. She wears short, tight denim shorts and a tight blouse that does not cover her stomach, but she is still ashamed of giving this view to others. She still She pulls the ends of the short blouse down to try to cover her stomach and navel. Putting a nail in her tongue is fun and beautiful, as is shaving the right part of her hair and forcing her to have sex with high school students at their graduation ceremony. There are hundreds of ideas to continue this wonderful story until infinity. I hope you focus on this series and publish a new part every two weeks. It is the most wonderful thing a person will read on the Internet.

Thinking of some way to make Jo pregnant, and the same goes for the color of her skin, to become more tanned, to inject her with a tanner, to lie in the tanning machine, to lie on the beach, it's a beautiful thing. The same goes for her work as a stripper and a waitress. She was a businesswoman today. She has a much smaller job. There are no clothes for her. Discreet and concealing clothing, all of which are revealing. I also order that she spend time in prison for a week or a month or lose her identity and that Claire steal Jo’s identity and seize her money from the divorce money.

Send Joanne wearing a bikini to the hotel on the beach to share a party with her young friends, boys and girls, in the public pool of the hotel. Let them smear her ass and boobs with cream and sunscreen. Let her ass be naked when she wears thongs. Let her dance, lower and raise her ass while dancing. Let her descend more and lose her self-esteem even more. . To urinate with a group of girls in open bathroom stalls and to wipe and clean her pussy with Kleenex in front of everyone.

The story is enjoyable, but the story must be developed and the events in the new parts must be better linked with the events in the previous parts.

I suggest that you design a new series of this story. Each new part represents a new scenario and case for Jo, for example, as some readers and commentators suggested, to start with pornographic films and another part about Jo going to prison. Another part about Jo’s sadistic life. Another part is that Jo’s breasts are injected with hormones until she gets... Milking to breastfeed a number of children, part about Joe traveling to get more tans at a resort in a neighboring city, part about losing her company, part about events at the club, part about him going to the mall, shopping and buying clothes.

I suggest that you focus your efforts more on writing this story and writing it as one of your best stories.

It is interesting that the number of words in the story is more than 30,000, for example.

It is desirable to publish a part every week or 10 days. Sometimes you publish one part every month.

If you invest your effort in writing this story well, developing it, and developing its ideas, you may turn it into a book in the future or translate it into languages such as Portuguese or French, for example.

It's really an amazing story