by InfiniteCuddles
Looking forward to Jodie's New Life Chapter 3. And also Rachel's new life Chapter 1. If Mom is still hot you could welcome her in as well.
It started off great but quickly devolved into a sordid fucking mess.
The resources required to keep this many victims would be astronomical. It would make Epstein look like a rank amateur.
And let’s be honest, if college girls are their prey, why not underaged victims? Rapists aren’t exactly known for being law/abiding.
Second: what happens when they get old? Do they turn into snuff toys where torture and mutilation are their only companions?
Third: first Jodi, then Rachel and no one is going to be suspicious?
Fourth: unless the guards are sociopaths, someone, at some point, would turn. Maybe they get married, have a daughter and she gets kidnapped…you think a dad is going to look at these mindless husks of skin and not imagine what their parents are suffering?
You have the makings of a fantastic story but I suspect you have limited creative ability to engage your readers more than you have.
Good start to Rachels journey. I hope both ladies get groomed and fully used. Thanks keep up the good work.