All Comments on 'Jodie's New Life Ch. 02'

by InfiniteCuddles

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Can't wait for next part.

zena99zena99almost 3 years ago

Looking forward to Jodie's New Life Chapter 3. And also Rachel's new life Chapter 1. If Mom is still hot you could welcome her in as well.

WhackdoodleWhackdoodlealmost 3 years ago

It started off great but quickly devolved into a sordid fucking mess.

The resources required to keep this many victims would be astronomical. It would make Epstein look like a rank amateur.

And let’s be honest, if college girls are their prey, why not underaged victims? Rapists aren’t exactly known for being law/abiding.

Second: what happens when they get old? Do they turn into snuff toys where torture and mutilation are their only companions?

Third: first Jodi, then Rachel and no one is going to be suspicious?

Fourth: unless the guards are sociopaths, someone, at some point, would turn. Maybe they get married, have a daughter and she gets kidnapped…you think a dad is going to look at these mindless husks of skin and not imagine what their parents are suffering?

You have the makings of a fantastic story but I suspect you have limited creative ability to engage your readers more than you have.

InfiniteCuddlesInfiniteCuddlesalmost 3 years agoAuthor

Thank you all for your kind words! Chapter 3 is coming soon…

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Good start to Rachels journey. I hope both ladies get groomed and fully used. Thanks keep up the good work.

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