All Comments on 'John Smith Inc. Ch. 06'

Love your story, as always. While I do wish chapters were more frequent, I understand about real life, and that quality trumps quantity. I do have to wonder when we will Jacqueline, and especially her daughters again. They, especially John's half sisters, seem to have fallen off the map. Would live to see him visit them again, and hopefully they can have play time with him, and each other. 5*

Great installment! Please hurry with the next before I forget the characters again :)

I really enjoy these characters and multiple story lines. Really hope they stick it to these piles of shit human traffickers! I also hope that this Paris guy does not become a problem between April and John because I love them together as unconventional as their relationship is. Maybe Paris could become an agent since he is having so much sex anyway.

I would also like to see Chance hook back up with the girls he saved.

Thank you for another chapter!

Not sure how I missed it when it first posted, but so glad I got to read the awesome chapter. Nice to see the growth of character and story. If I remember, the old masters had acolytes to better serve the rings so it is good to see this development. Can't wait to see the beat down that is coming..., thanks for the cliff hanger. JT

Great news loyal readers!

I've just uploaded chapter 7. With any luck, you should be able to access it before the end of the week. Thanks for your support.

Good story but poorly written. I see over the last few chapters you have lost your proof reader. Too bad because the bad grammar, mixing of tenses and trying to put too many words in a sentence, is incredibly distracting.

I think that you captured the interest of men in general about their life I have enjoyed your stories about John Smith and would read more about this group.

April is a slut. John is a Cuckold...

My AWT marathon continues, ... I am only 2 years behind now, ... at least I know this series was completed, ... ;-

) TTFN