All Comments on 'Join the Club Ch. 02'

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PixiehoffPixiehoffover 1 year ago

I love this - and you 💕💕. Lovely to see you writing again ❤️

HottieOlwenHottieOlwenover 1 year ago

June's diary will tell Pixie just what a faithful girlfriend June is. I find Cara's predatory behaviour is both irritating and yet intriguing. I am so glad she has found her Mistress. I loved the description of Cara's entry into the Mile High Club! These 2 chapters have been a gorgeous read, June. You are an excellent author. It's only fair that I give you 5 stars for thus chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

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If not for the heads-ups in the chapter title I would never have expected the turn of events with Susan and Cara. - I must say it was all very smart and tidy. (I suppose a mid-flight shower with a practiced Domme will do that). Issues were resolved with no conflict between June and Cara, which was nice.. And of course the “reconnecting” flight when June reunited with her Pixie was smooth and sexy. (The bit with Pixie reading the opening lines of the chapter from Junes notebook was a nice flourish right at the end.) Hopefully it won’t be too long before JPint is inspired to serve up another “flight” of fancy. 🍿🍿🍿🍿🍿

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

You devil June. That certainly raised expectations for the next episode. So good!

MaonaighMaonaighover 1 year ago
A tangled web...

...although not exactly echoing Scott's meaning. Let's see... Eva is Susan's domme but Susan is actually Eva's domme. Then in one swift leap Susan becomes Cara's domme and Susan just happens to have a spanking-new collar ready for Cara. Reading between the lines, it looks as if Susan is aiming for a high-class harem of happy little subs. A tangled web indeed. I think you're having a lot of fun with this, June, and you are managing to pass it on to your readers. Good, solid five-star story-telling.

Wiz1002Wiz1002over 1 year ago

Fabulous sequel, would be great if it could continue…

chloe_switchchloe_switchover 1 year ago

Wow June! Lovely, hot chapter. And Cara being collared was a real surprise!

JPintrainingJPintrainingover 1 year agoAuthor

Thank you so much dear Pix….there would be no stories without you

❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

JPintrainingJPintrainingover 1 year agoAuthor

So happy you are enjoying my writing Olwen..I am so flattered

JPintrainingJPintrainingover 1 year agoAuthor

Anonymous, so glad you liked my ending. I like to always do something different.

Your gracious comments mean a lot

JPintrainingJPintrainingover 1 year agoAuthor

The devil is in the writing Cleeve 😜

JPintrainingJPintrainingover 1 year agoAuthor

Maonaigh,

You always inspire me to improve. Thank you

JPintrainingJPintrainingover 1 year agoAuthor

Thank you Wiz1002

Glad you are enjoying

lisam76lisam76over 1 year ago

Simply put, JEALOUS!

Sissybethany22Sissybethany22over 1 year ago

Fantastic,nice little harem Susan is getting, you ladies are so naughty but I love it. I am sure your stories are getting hotter,

Keep up the good work June.

Kisses 💋💋

JPintrainingJPintrainingover 1 year agoAuthor

Thank you so much Chloe, I figured you might enjoy it …giggles

Gerri36Gerri36over 1 year ago

Hi June, I loved the story and especially how you've turned Cara. I am anxious to read what else you have planned for Cara and as you know, Cara reminds me of someone.. Kisses

JPintrainingJPintrainingover 1 year agoAuthor

Lisa, so delighted to know you are enjoying my story

JPintrainingJPintrainingover 1 year agoAuthor

Thank you Bethany. You are too kind.

JPintrainingJPintrainingover 1 year agoAuthor

Gerri, thank you for your generous comments. I think Cara’s adventures are just beginning.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Just, well, fab! Your stories are so hot June, I hope you get as damp writing them as we do reading them. Awaiting part 3. Ann xx

JPintrainingJPintrainingover 1 year agoAuthor

Dearest Ann

Thank you for your continued enjoyment

June

Save_Classic_ViewSave_Classic_Viewover 1 year ago
Happy Christmas to Pixie and June, and may my Christmas Wish bring you both Fulfilment, Happiness, and Joy.

Dear Pixie and June,

Thank-you so much Pixie & June for bringing happiness and joy throughout the year, with your Literotica published works, your Literotica picture forums, and your Emily's Escort chatroom, which your 1,042 loyal readers & followers (972 Pixie & 70 June) absolutely enjoy.

I know you both love each other dearly; however, I feel that one thing is missing in your lives. I had hoped and prayed, that the Church of England made a decision, on allowing LGBTQ marriages in 2022, as I had read earlier this year. Now, I read that the Church of England will make their decision in February in 2023 and that 6 of the clergy voting members, expressed publicly, that that they will vote in favor of allowing / performing LBGTQ marriages.

Rest assured Pixie and June, that I will keep praying 🙏 for this miracle to occur, but I will not be satisfied until I see an illustrated story from you both, on this wonderful and glorious event, to make my Christmas wish complete.

God Bless you Both Pixie and June, and I hope you both have a Wonderful, Blessed 👼🙏, and a Happy Christmas 🎅🏻🎄❄🤶🏻 ⛄.

v/r

Anonymous

FYI: I also Pray for Good Health to you both and also for June's Mom.

GayKatGayKatabout 1 year ago

💋 Wow!... Chapter-2 is Hot,,, Yes!

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Hallo June!

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Beautifully written hot and sexy, also informative. ... I have heard about airplanes with showers in first class, I wonder if myself and Queen Jackie would fit in the shower at the same time, I stand 5'10 + and 168 lbs, she stands 6'4 + and 254 lbs, and neither of us are fat!

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As I was saying chapter-2 is hot and sexy.... we can hardly wait to read chapters 3, 4 and 5!

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Thank-you, 5-Stars and 5-Yummy Orgasms 😜..

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The Black Queen and Gay Kat..

JPintrainingJPintrainingabout 1 year agoAuthor

Hi GayKat,

Thank you for your kind comments. I hope you enjoy my stories

sarah4gurlzsarah4gurlz8 months ago

Deliciously hot! Thank you!

Sarah!

xxxxx

FranziskaSissyFranziskaSissy8 months ago

The other side of the lead ….. may this will lift her spirits into another dimension and so cara can settle down …… The huntress becomes prey

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