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Past tense of see is saw, not seen.

Please do a review of verb tense, changes required, or not, when there is a verb in the sentence / paragraph.

Your stories are hot, Hot, HOT !

It sounds like this Middleton is supposed to be down south they must have got a lot more tolerant down there that they used to be. The old south I think the characters would at a minimum get beat & maybe get killed.